All Comments on 'The New Kid Ch. 09'

Great end to the series. Glad that Kyle and Corey got a happy ending. I don't want the series to end! Please keep writing.

Although Ang is still not a fav of mine maybe Scott will sort her out. LOL

.....I really liked the story wish there was more , BUT.....oh well look forward to reading more from you in the future

That was an incredible story, and I sure look forward to reading more of your stories !

Please write some more :)

I would kill for a relationship like this!!! So sweet and in love... PLEASE write more stories! :-)

Loved the story. It had a natural feel to it. I do feel Kyle was a little too forgiving, but that that's the way he is. I love that Scott and Angela ended up together. Also, thank you for the little glimpse into their future. I always wonder what happens after HEA.

Loved it!

Please, please write more!

can you make more like this most things on this are just sex i know thats sorta how its meant to be but i like it when it has some intamacie

I was all on fire about Angela...LOL, she still bugs me, but you know what? That was a very realistic thing that occurred with her interference. And just like a real friend Kyle was upfront in dealing with her and the fact that she fell right into the high pitch squeal that only excitement can bring I am sorta ok with her. Angela's call to Corey helped, but she needed to learn to mind her business. I am so happy with this story. You do great work.

Seriously this story would not be anything more than words if not for you guys reading it so thank you so much. Like I said before, I will really REALLY try write something new and post it within the month but no promises. I will say that your nice comments have motivated me and I will get cracking on a new story tomorrow I promise. Hopefully the next one doesn't take 6 months to write like this story. Haha. Once again thanks guys.

I can't wait for your next story, but that said don't rush it. This was great and if I have to wait six months I will. Thank you so much for sharing this one.

Completly amazing! Loved it. Greatings from Dominican Republic. 16 years old AAA kisses

Great story, you got me coming back everyday for an update! Although I'm "still a little peeved" about what Angela did and how quickly Kyle forgave her, the dramaqueen in my prolly would've love to see some histarics! Will definitely keep an eye out of your next story!

~LadyLana

GAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVED IT!!! I LOVED IT, I LOVED IT, I LOVED IT, I LOVED IT, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!~

I NEED A BOOK TO TAKE WITH ME EVERYWHERE!! I'M SUPER ECSTATIC RIGHT NOW!!

Thanks guys. I smile everytime idea your comments. Just to let you know. The next story...well I haven't started because I have 2 ideas and I dot know which to go with. And I'm having massive writer's block but no worries, I'll get cracking soon. Thanks again guys.

I LOVED it because it wasn't all just sex, it was what someone would actually go through.

10/10

A WONDERFUL sweet story that ticked every emotional box. Please put it together as an Ebook.

wow

absolutely great story

thank you for having me check everyday for next chapter

kept me in suspense

cannot wait for next story

I love how you ended this story. This was such a sweet story. Great work.

It was maybe a little rushed at the very end, but overall you did a great job. I still think Angela got off too easy. I wouldn't have forgiven Corey as quickly either.

The POV changes in the story were quite amateur and shallow to say the least. As a reader, it is clear to me that Kyle is obviously the only one you can feel for. A little more dexterity in bringing out character depth would be good instead of glossing over their parts. I was rather disappointed as POV changes are to let the reader gain an insight to other character's minds but all you did here was to tell the sequence of events with another 'I'. It was pretty obvious that the only reason you did this was because you were limited by your main character which shouldn't be the case. Overall story was good keep improving!

o what a delightful love story , one of the best ive read

When I saw you were leaving for a bit I got a tad worried, because i hoped you would finish this story. Well I feel like a total goof. You finished it when i was on vacation and I missed it.

I shoulda known you wouldn't leave us hanging. :o)

I loved this sweet, sweet story. :o)

Awesome story here, couldn't stop reading. Wanted to slap Angela soooo badly!! Just the right amount of hot sexy stuff too. Thanks for sharing it with us!

bloody wonderful

I cried. Not gunna lie. Went above and beyond. A story that wasn't just about secks. The character development was great. Few typos though. Over all amazing :)

Musicfreak,

Thats story is absaloutly amazing! I cant get over it...it just makes me giddy with happiness; I just wanted to thank you for sharing it.

Keep writing!

~S

such a great story so glad that you shared it . Made me feel so good and warm inside again great job hope to read more from you

Just love the natural flow of your writing. Super story line!

Awesome ending to a terrific story

A good ending to a good story. I wish Corey would have developed some great hair for that muscular chest. He'd look great with chest hair to grace those chiseled pecs!

I am glad it worked out and yes fate can be funny. I somehow hoped that Angela and Scott would meet and fall in love. Well written

Awesome work bro.

Awesome story! When I get to the last sentences of these HEA stories I get depressed and jealous of these people. Lol

I fangirled a little when Corey "proposed"

Fantastic end to a great series, loved the adventure thank you,

I really liked the story but it got derailed for me when Angela butted her sorry ass into other people’s business and then it never got back on track, IMO. You could’ve explored Corey’s insecurities and coming out in a different way that didn’t make the Angela character hated, didn’t make Corey look like an immature self-centered douche, and didn’t make Kyle seem like a passive doormat for everyone else to shit on and then be immediately forgiven. So much character damage was done by this unnecessary drama and the ending wasn’t enough to rebound it. It felt artificial and forced. I love happy endings but this one didn’t feel earned or allowed to transpire at its own pace.

If Corey knew he’d made a mistake right away and should have (by his own admission) returned to apologize by Sat, then why the fuck did he ghost Kyle until Thursday. Makes no sense. Just unneeded drama. It makes him appear weak, insincere, and unreliable - this could all happen again the next time some near-stranger like Angela fills his head with doubts. Absolutely no consequences to Angela or Corey for their selfish, hurtful behavior which ruined the rest of the story for me. I did at least like that Kyle fucked Corey to restore some equality and balance between them. Scott is too good for Angela and I’m not sure Corey really deserves Kyle. I also wish that Scott and Zack had both given Corey a real ass-ripping for being such a dick to Kyle.