All Comments on 'The New Neighbours'

Many word errors take away from the story.

Loved his dream image of breasts moist with salvia; a very flowery imagination!

I didn't think it was done as well it could have been done, but especially the last line was a real turn off.

I thought it was not done as well as it could have been. I usually don't compIain when I don't really like a story, but the I found the last line to be a real turn off.