All Comments on 'The New Slave Ch. 02'

Love it, great story, cant wait for the next chapter

Great story! At some point I felt the story was building too fast, but since that's just me and my picture of a dominant male (being in control even when turned on, and keeping it no matter what) I didn't want to let that taint the flow of the story. Five stars for this :)

Hmm, the plot thickens lol. Good job showing his feelings, fear and confusion about his situation.

Damn. As messed up as it is, that piss-play/punishment gets me hot every time I read it.

W0w,I wish I was the hero in this story!

Just rereading your story, and once again it's wonderful.

Very hot. I would like to be your slave

Verrrry good story.

would love to be daniel, i want to be enslaved