All Comments on 'The New Slave'

this should be quite a treat. Enjoyed this first part, eager to read more about these three.

I look forward to the next installment. Always exciting Opels!

WOW, THE STORY IS SENSATIONAL! IT WAS GREAT TO SEE THAT THE SLAVE GOT SOMETHING OF HER OWN! CAN'T WAIT TIL THE NEXT PART COMES!

please write the next one loved it loved it loved it

Terry

cant wait for the next part very good story

Please please please right more, this is the best story i've read in a while.

Your writing style entrances me :) You conveyed her thoughts and emotions very well, and also reflected her Master's thoughts. The twist being her dominant side, and the object of her dominance is a willful young man named WIlliam... I imagined him looking like that guy who adorned the covers of so many romance novels. The sexual tension between them was thick enough to cut with a knife :) Your protagonist seemed well-trained, but she still had that untamed wild streak . I love it!