by Alex Finch
You have a great story, but it is way too fragmented. You keep starting and stopping between the two main characters.
...& I'm betting that the final 3 are next. As for the boys, the same thing goes, only I think that a 3-way on teacher is definitely for. A bit of anal action by the girl's teacher wouldn't be totally out of the question, either.
This is well written and will allow you to continue the story line, The best I have read in a while.
Damn, give me a class of teen girls and let me eat!!! Good story! Great work. Keep it up!!