All Comments on 'The New Teacher and Me'

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Very nice first submission. You have promise as an author. Hope to see more from you in the future.

I am single as a pringle since the day I was born is the best line in the whole story,

wow that was a masterpiece to say the least.

So hot! I teach young, nubile 20-somethings and to read here what has run through my mind so many times.... Certainly one of the drawbacks of quarantined remote teaching.

Excellent. Very enjoyable and a well written story. Good build up leading to second part. Looking forward to seeing the next installment.

SB

Hahaha I could tell a woman wrote this. No immediate "my tits were a 32c and I look like a bronze goddess". Haha just real people being soft and cute.

This was good. My only suggestion is work on your dialogue a little bit. Listen to how people speak, and you'll see what I mean.

hey just saying but there will always be people under 18 on this site, i know this bc ive been reading on this site the past 5 years (21 now, found this site at 16) but damn that was amazing and erotic

~Red

Would love a 2nd chapter

Excellent story, even if a sexual experience between teacher and student is so wrong.

Nice storyline, and the sex is great! Just one criticism: decide whether you want the present tense, or the past, and stick with it. Don't swap from one to the other and back again. I'd say whatever tense you use to do your rough notes of the story in, the past tense is much easier to manage for the final version. It reads more naturally as it sounds like the narrator is sharing the incidents with readers after they happened.

I would love to read another part to this story! If not the next time they meet then maybe if they stay together and have a longer relationship I would love to see that too! I’m sure anyone reading would agree!

When are you going to continue with this story? It is lovely 🙂

This is a SEXY story. I agree that you could have stayed with either past tense or present tense. I'd also add maybe include some better descriptions of the narrator and the teacher. Like breast size or whether either woman had a shaved pubic area things like that. I personally feel that helps with the mental imagery while choking the chicken if you catch my drift.

Good story Can not wait for the next part of this story