All Comments on 'The New Teacher Ch. 04'

I very much liked your story series, and hope you continue.

Your syntax is somewhat formal, but nice, and some of the punctuation is odd, compared to our norm. An editor could help without much stress, since most wording, grammar, spelling is quite good.

I am referring to the previous comment about not being a native english speaker.

If any editor would be interested in help me with more idiomatic wording, I would certainly be a taker.

But it is not easy to find an editor that is willing to look into longer stories.