All Comments on 'The New Whore Order'

brah this was sexy af

Good job. I think I managed to destroy a bunch of my remaining brain cells trying to read this.

The problem here isn't so much that it's offensive, as that it's inane trolling, of which at least a third of the wordcount is a dry recitation of events, because you wanted to be sure the audience knew ALL of your deliberately provacative worldbuilding, and knew you weren't a good enough writer to communicate it naturally. Not reading the rest of your stories, because who gives a shit, but if the WRITING in this is you actually trying, and you write anything you want to be taken seriously, that's profoundly embarrassing for you. If they're ALL other troll fics, that's also incredibly sad. I would recommend a different hobby, such as carpentry, cooking, or knitting, all of which can have tangible benefits for you and any friends or loved ones.

Take care,

Anon

When I say this has big Turner Diaries energy I don't just mean the content (though obviously that too) I also mean the completely bland writing style with a boring list of historical events and worldbuilding at the beginning. I genuinely can't think of a worse way to spend your time than writing this work.

racist drivel

Dang that was different.

Thanks for sharing.