All Comments on 'The New World Ch. 06'

gosh, matteo can't catch a break. I am unsure how Roderick could have found him all this way away in a different world. It seems a bit unrealistic to me. I am also surprised Matteo wouldn't be aware of Ahote even in his panic. This story took an awful turn but as a fan, I will wait for the next chapter!

okay, seriously,Matteo has the worst luck! for once can this be a happy ending with a successful pain free rescue and a happily ever after? please? *there's a cherry on top*

came off as an anachronism and disrupted the flow a little...but obviously didn't stop me from reading further.

You really struck a chord in my heart with the last paragraph. :(( it shows what an amazing writer you are! :D

I almost gave you one star for being so cruel....I really thought they would get away...to the last chapter, I hope it doesn't end like this...

i knew Roderick was coming i felt it in my bones i hope he gets the alpha and they tear each other to bits as for the first time for Ahote and matt very hot loved the submissiveness