All Comments on 'The Newlyweds Next Door Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent!

I really enjoyed reading the story. The more non-consent, the better.

I hope you will continue your excellent work.

JoannePareJoannePareover 7 years ago
Wonderful

It is a wonderful story of D & S and I am so eager to see the next parts as the couple is finally taken into total ownership of Mistress Olivia.

Please keep writing as your style is so magnificent.

Joanne

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More Please....

More More More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Thanks

Really enjoyed it. Would love to be Crystal Cherry. xxxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Great story, can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
When is the next story coming

When are you going to be done with the next story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Can't wait for more!!!!

Please write more soon! These have me on the edge of my seat!

TasksForSubsTasksForSubsover 7 years agoAuthor
Part four coming soon

I've started writing it now and will try to have it done in the next few days.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great

Greatread whens the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Brill

Any news on part four

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I want more

Do you have a date on when you'll post the next part?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I can't wait for more

Any idea when the next chapter will be uploaded, this story is so hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More????

So I'm starting to guess this won't ever be finished :(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Need

I need more of this story in my life

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please finish

This story has been fantastic please add more

TasksForSubsTasksForSubsalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Parts Four and Five

The story has been finished but Literotica won't post part four. The last parts for the story can be found on my blog, http://tasksforsubsandslaves.tumblr.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hi does Crystal have sex

Is Crystal going to suck a male cock to complete his transform her to the female he was meant to be

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Was he

Was crystal last Carl made into a girl did it deal with the sticky and get my p****

trikertony97vtrikertony97vover 1 year ago

OMG your imagination no's no bounds it just gets better

only glad i didn't move in next door to Olivia

TasksForSubsTasksForSubsover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you Triker, I'm glad you enjoyed it! There are more stories on my Patreon www.patreon.com/tasksforsubsstories

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

can't wait for revealing serena and crystal

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