All Comments on 'The Next Morning'

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BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Damn

That was some shower! Can't wait to see what happens next

newjaynenewjayneover 11 years ago
That was good!

That was really good - plus a (very welcome) indication that there's more to come.

josephstevensjosephstevensover 11 years ago
Nice!

Dare a bloke enter here? If so, thanks for a lovely story...and a nice twist at the end...though as soon as she takes the call out of earshot, you know something is up....great tale...thanks!

monkeyboy80monkeyboy80over 11 years ago
more more more.........x

Loving this story, it's got to be a trilogy...at least! X

redsox04meredsox04meover 11 years ago

Good one...I'm thinking there is a daughter or son at home ....with gramma!

psychobillyloverpsychobillyloverover 11 years agoAuthor
Thank You!

Thanks everyone for the comments and ratings!

I want you to know that the comments and ratings really motivate me to push on and produce better scenes and writing. Please KEEP IT UP and I promise I will.

SexoSudoryCalorSexoSudoryCalorabout 11 years ago
More...

More, more, more, more. :p

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Update

This story needs a new chapter, it screams its need of more.... So please...

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