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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Just about

a perfect story.

fastandsloppyfastandsloppyover 14 years ago
One of the hottest stories I've ever read

Wow. Get outta my mind. You covered all the bases on every dark fantasy I've tossed off to since I was fourteen. Excellent, excellent action. You're getting on my favorites list SU2NG!

One small suggestion, your story would have benefitted from a few more proof-reads. You switch verb tense a few times and there are several little typing errors. But I am frequently guilty of the same thing so I'm sympathetic. Besides I can overlook such minor details for such an awesome story.

Keep up the good work.

silenceup2nogoodsilenceup2nogoodover 14 years agoAuthor
Look for a follow up

Yes, the original story was done in first person current, which had my verbs different, then I switched it at the last minute, Sorry, shouldn't post late night.

But let me thank everyone for the comments and votes. Look for not one, but two rough nasty follow-up stories as Barbara aka FuckMeat gets really worked over during the business conference.

I'm thinking a pair of bondage stripper lesbians with huge strap-ons for part 3...:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I too have a rather large cock, not 11 inches though and you described well the feeling of a womens pussy when you push all the way in and their pussies spasm around your cock as they orgasm when you tap their cervix.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I agree with one of the comments here. My cock is large as well and i also enjoy the feeling of a womens pussy orgasming around my cock as i invade her cervix.I went to a conference and met up with James who I knew from other conferences. We were having a drink after the first day when a well dressed woman came over and said hello to James. He introduced me to Lee, a colleague of his, and asked if she would like a drink. She said ok. Lee looked to be in her fifties, plumpish but hair and makeup immaculate as was the matching deep blue skirt and top and the sheer nylons. After a few drinks, Lee went to the ladies and I commented to James how classy she was. He smiled, yeh but a real slut, I must have looked surprised but he said what are you interested, I would have thought she was a bit old for you. I smiled, no I think she is attractive, he looked at me, well if you want to join us I am sure she wont mind. What do you mean, well she is coming back to my room, up to you. Lee came back, we had another drink and James said I have asked Rob to join us, you ok with that. She looked at me and smiled, I would like that. Thats how about a half hour later , Lee was on her knees, James cock in her mouth and her pussy pulsing wildly around my cock as I punched into her cervix. The next day, I was a bit sluggish and sitting through the first session was a real drag except for looking at Lee who smiled at me a lot. At the lunch break, she came up to me and said, it goes for an hour, lets not waste it, I need a fuck, are you interested and walked away her plump ass moving beautifully in her skirt.I followed her to the lift, up to her room, no James this time as at first she sucked on my cock, then decided she would like to lower herself down on it. I watched her face as she moved up and down on me, soaking me as she did so. She slumped forward, I rolled her over and lifting her legs gave her a hard, fast fuck as her pussy squirted all over me. We went back to the conference, I looked at her, she smiled and opened her legs a little, she had left her underwear in her room. James was right, his words, a real slut.

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ADDED 2/2022: I'm back and will be posting new stuff soon. Thank you for checking out my bio. Hopefully you've enjoyed one or more of my stories and wanted to see behind the curtain of the naughty Oz. About me: I'm a professional working in a male dominated field yet who hol...

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