All Comments on 'The Night Lines'

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Fandeboris about 2 years ago

Good story! Thanks for language lesson.

Greenyellowred about 2 years ago

Great story, I love the note at the dnd

quantumentanglement about 2 years ago

Captivated by the cinematic writing, but also by the immediacy of Mira’s thoughts. Anime fuelled inspiration maybe? More, please.

Case21 about 2 years agoAuthor

Glad to see people are enjoying this story, and the language note too! Thanks, Fandeboris and Greenyellowred!

Quantum Entanglement, you're spot on. It's definitely anime inspired. It's also based on my experiences of living in Tokyo and commuting on the Odakyu Odawara train line.

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