All Comments on 'The Nightwatchman'

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Frankenstein1962Frankenstein1962about 4 years ago
Great story...

I really liked this story. Can't wait to read your others. Thanks for sharing. Frankie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
please, decide where her hands are chained

Her hands were chained to the wall "above her head" ...unlocked her chains from the wall, although they still linked her hands "behind her back"

A good story, except for this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Anachronism...

Fun story, but I don't think those "handcuffs" work like you think they work in a setting like this.

Ellienora35Ellienora35over 3 years ago

I would love to read a novel where this was the meet cute. Then later, the lord works to find her and finds out she is a baron’s daughter or something. It would be awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Love that she gets the last laugh

Could take this story further, it’s so fun. Hopefully the lord can redeem himself... she is awesome!

thomas_deanthomas_deanover 2 years ago

The Highwayman's Secret

The Highwayman strikes and dissolves into the mist. How is the possible? The Highwayman is a woman. Though captured, she manages to use all her skills to escape. She manages to turn the tables on the Lord of the Manor with little more than a slight of hand. Gaining the upper berth in bed, she takes his Lordship cowgirl style an manacles him to the bed as she makes her escape. Certainly an entertaining piece.

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