All Comments on 'The Nu Mind Pt. 01'

I like it keep it coming

Can’t wait to see more chapters.

Good first part. Can’t wait to see more.

Reminds me of Venom. Lol. Thought it was kinda funny and a great read. Can't wait till the next chapter!

It's a pretty good concept and all, but there are alot of typos. For the next chapter I suggest you fix them. Keep up the good work.

I really like the back and forth between the two of them. it was kind of funny. I'm not sure why the mom was so quiet as the alien was reprogramming her but that's really my only complaint. also from my understanding its a typical family of 4?

Just 2 quick things, please proof read acouple times before you submit it to catch ittle errors an try to write in the past participle when narrating as it will help the story flow

much better.

Loved the concept and hope to see more chapters soon.