All Comments on 'The Nude Gun Ch. 05'

Your writing gets better and better, this and the latest Gift from my Father have some of the best written erotic passages of pure sex I have read in a long time. I can't wait to see Joe's adventures in space. Please write the next chapter fast

Well written, including previous chapters, and well presented. Keep going. I have enjoyed all of your "tales".

when's the next one

I can't wait where you go next. If you don't mind can you maybe spend some more time with the high school girls. Those elements in the story seems to have been left as simple side note. You are such a descriptive and expressive writer, i hope you give those girls more focus. Of course, I will return to great stories no matter what.

I took a look at your story. I'll make some edits if you're willing...

Thanks for the overwhelming response. I have several candidates to consider now. Thank you. I will be contacting two potential edits soon. Unfortunately, I don't have time to thank you all individually, still have to work a real job to support the family. Thanks again.

Love this series. Keep it coming.

Looking forward to reading more of this series :)

this was a great chapter. you sure are making the story more and more interesting as you go along. i can't wit for next chapter to come out.i will just love to see where this is headed. keep up the good work. from a loyal reader,bob.

Keep writing more. Thank you for what you've written but write more!!!

Love the concept of turning Nicki and Nancy towards their opposite orientations, yet both being satisfied with the changes rather than remaining forced. The story had got intriguing re Matt's objectives and plan for Joe. Looking forward to the next instalment.

Love the Halley Berry doppelganger !!!

DHS Inspector .. Is it Dr Cross, Dr Carr, or Dr Cook?

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!