All Comments on 'The Nude Gun Ch. 06'

I hope it doesn't take very long for the next chapter. I still hope that you get back to the cheerleaders too.

I've been enjoying the series, but this one fell off the rails a bit. Seems like it was a bit rushed, nothing with the same detail as before, and way to many pop culture references or "product placements".

Still looking forward to the next segment though.

I have been missing this Tory. Getting better and better

Still enjoying this series but there were quite a few typos / grammer issues that made it hard to follow at times. Please don't let this put you off continuing as it's a great story :) and looking forward to reading more....

when the next one coming

Her name is spelled "Mystique". Just an FYI. Keep up the good work.

I absolutely love this story. My only complaint would be that you can't write the chapters fast enough to satisfy my need for more. I hope to see the story through to it's glorious finish.

Love this story and really want to read what happens next, want to see him with Lexi and her mother in a threesome

would be funny if the lesbians were fertile and not on the pill when he first cums in them.

Can you give an update if you plan to continue this story or if so, when we might get a new chapter...

I wish the MC wouldn't be so much of an asshole toward the girls, takes a lot away from the enjoyment. In the end he's only selfish, changing them for his pleasure and then throwing them away, letting them deal with the consquences of his actions by themselves

Waiting for more, I hope you finish what you have started. Very good story!!

your volunteer editor did a great job through the first 5 chapters. What happened on this one?

As a bit of a nerd joke, and a pop-culture reference. My mind keeps replacing the name of this series with 'The Naked Gun'. Good show, good movies.

Fun story!!!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!