All Comments on 'The Nude Gun Ch. 09'

I wonder if Matt Storm will add some of the victims of the initial ray gun bursts to the fold of agents.

Wish was a longer chapter, but understand the buildup. That said, I think Nancy needs to be added to the ranks, assuming you've not al ready planned for that. Keep up the great work.

Thanks for the feedback.

I have a little time on my hands, so I will see if I can get another chapter done before the 15th of November. No promises.

Unfortunately I still have to work for a living, but have a few ideas that may not take too long to develop. I am having fun with this and I am pleased that you are enjoying.

I am even enjoying this story more the the gift from his father, while both great on their own this one just scratches the itch a little more for me. I would have never thought I would enjoy a mindcontrol story but you make it fun instead of dark and seedy like it could be. Keep up the good work

I have completed and posted Chapter 10, if it passes muster I believe it will be up on Saturday.

I have begun what may be the final chapter of AGFMF (A Gift From My Father). I hope to wrap up the loose ends. Should it continue, it will be under another title, I am thinking like a spinoff. I'll know more once I complete it.

As always, thanks for your encouragement!

Great job, thanks for sharing your work.