by Nudewaitress
really like the slow pace and creative scene settings combination. So refreshingly different told than the usual Ds humiliation story
I hope she will finally do the naked golf caddy for a private lesson (with the club only open for them but she will not know it) and maybe even serve as a hole.
Seems there's more of his series coming?
I sure hope so! One of the best series out here!
Keep writing please :)
10 outa 10...
or 5 outa 5..
Been a while.. is there a new chapter coming soon?
I sure hope so!
Hope you are well... and still writing :)_
Keep us updated and post more stories on how your be humiliated. You tell the story well. I enjoy reading all you wrote about so far. Like to read more.
as much as you hated it from the start, I think you were starting to enjoy this but wouldn't let on them as they might think of something worse. But this new life takes some getting used to and your body gives you away so just enjoy it and be the slut you were meant to be
Yes, its targets a niche genre. Well told stories are rare in general, even more in this genre. Even 1.5 years later I appreciate outstanding qualities. Your writing was both enticing and fun to read, well speed with erotic thrills and suspense. Especially liked the plot ideas that paint a credible slow path towards increasing humiliation and transformation.
Thanks for sharing Your work and please do continue.
Another dead storyline? If you aren't going to finish it at least have the decency to remove it at some point! 2 years? Really?
Wow wish I had a waitress like you. I think you could be a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing your sexy thoughts and stories with us horny folk.
Interesting story. I do like the thought of her being a nude caddy. I am waiting for more submissions.
I enjoy the stories and look forward to more. I would like to see her work as a nude caddy.
When does the installment come out where she says F-this and takes revenge on all her tormentors? Doing unspeakable things to all who live in her “community”!
I continued to be thrilled by this story and hope very much you will continue the story and have her turn the tables on her tormentors in some way. I would also like to see the author submit other stories on Literotica. Because she does humiliation so exquisitely well, I would think she could write a great story in the 'Judicial Punishment' genre on this site.
Came back after a few years .... Would be nice to read more .... Promising plot and writing, so far.