by AwayFromNewEngland
So, she's a cheating whore with self-esteem issues. Got it, and bored by it, since it's pretty much the same as about 9000 other equally pathetic tales along the same general plot arc.
Happened fast, but still exciting to think she'd get nude and have sex with him.
Great. Love the dirty talk. Can we have more please, this has so much potential. 5 Stars +.
Loved this story, especially since she wasn’t a sculpted gym rat. I find myself wishing for more which is the sign of a good story. There were some typos and misused words but not enough to lose your 5 star rating. I would have liked things to build more slowly too, but that’s just me. We’ll done!
OK FIL DIL story. Spelling, and word misuse takes away from the flow. You need too proof read before publishing. Barely 3 stars.
Great premise, but her going from being nervous about nudism to masturbating in front of him happened a bit too fast. Their conversation and sex after that was really hot. Five stars.
Nice. The wife cuckolding hubby with his own father is one of my favorite kinks, so ... but what I like about this story is that the motivations and the insecurities of all the main characters are addressed enough to lend a certain air of believability to it. The dialogue is good, too. I'll be watching for more!