by oggbashan
With so much more potential....this could be an entire series.
Definitely needs more chapters. With the backstories on the girls and what happens with Sonia and Ralph, there should be more than enough to go on. Hope you keep it going.
I am looking forward to further chapters from this submission, most enjoyable!!
I really enjoyed the way you brought the 4 ghosts to life, but allowed them to remain ghosts. This was best evidenced by the moment Abbie mounts Ralph and he finds her to be freezing cold inside. I would like to see what you could do with the rest of this tale, and hope you choose to revisit it at some point.