All Comments on 'The Octopus'

Very nice. I expected at some point for her to be fucked by Octopussy, that would have been the predictable thing to have happen. Thank you for being unpredictable! Very nice writing, smooth reading that didnt drag on like too many do. The aphrodisiac quality of the creature's cum was creatively stimulating. You also had just the right blend of 'erotic' and 'horror' to not kill the arousal. I hope to see more stories in this category, along this theme, from you. Thank you!

(cant get my username to work, but my name is Vaire)

Not enough sex! But quite amusing.

I had an urge to read something a bit different, and I most definitely got it! The only thing that bugged me was the speech pattern of the English guy. There are very few of us that would say "Hell, I've got no bleeding condoms". And I think I'd have a giggle fit if someone did.

All in all an interesting read, but the sex was over a little too quickly for me.

Love this story. Especially the last paragraph, very much like HPL would have written.

I listen to Belle and Sebastian when I read things here.

"When we make it, when we make it alive." B&S

"And we don't need a lifetime." B&S

"Take me ..." B&

(for a unique book lover)

They're poetry on music.

One time a while back I emailed Praire Lights to have them perform "Wrapped Up In Books"--youtube video here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YetG6_4qJiY

Have them perform at Prairie Lights. They are beautiful and wonderful. Their songs are poetry.

But maybe a lot of Iowa City people--even very literature/music people* (dear god, I know you exist)--don't know about Belle and Sebastian. I love them!

*Or the "literary" people don't want to mix their literature with their music? Which just can't be connected with writing, can it? That would be a feet.

Poetry, especially, should NEVER mix with music--

I'm starting to think writers are snobs and hypopots. As in "to off-set any a feet I might be presumed to have, I don't like music by Scottish people who use cellos, violins, etc. ... and who have the affrontry--flumetry--whatever--to actually have some thing--god knows what--called "God Help The Girl"--

"I'd burn the steak for them"--Jean Seberg (not--but she would) (have)

for an abused--excellent--I.C. writer (moi--not--that's french and what-not)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dl-A-X-8Fc8 -- this is weird even for me--i mean it scares me--

"you're always wearing gloves"--like in "Observatory Towers"

"I'm standing here naked, and you're ogling the squid."

And, after one of the tenticals (s?) went down her throat, and she survived, he held her on his lap, and said, "Well, look at you! Who'd have thunk it?!"

She blushed and looked down--in (faux) modesty--

"Now, do I get a story?"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OczRpuGKTfY

That's what the above link is SUPPOSED to be to.

It's really sweet--

Disapproving Rabbit: "Sartre wouldn't approve."

Yea

Da fuck

Interesting mix of "WHAT?" and "very good!"!