All Comments on 'The Odd Couple'

Adorable. Great work.

Short, sweet and heartwarming. It's good.

awwwwwwww

And also amazingly sweet. I liked this a lot. Quality authorship and sizzling sex scenes.

That defenseless-play was super hot, well done

Drugged rape? How romantic. I feel bad for whatever partners those commenters have.

First, amazing literary work displaying internal vs external goals and internal vs external conflict. Wow. That part of this work is magnificent, I'm talking publisher-with-big-pockets level of quality. Having said that... I couldn't like it, because its an abusive relationship cycle that resolved in any meaningful manner. That's my own fault. It isn't the fault of the work. I involve myself too far in stories to disassociate my own fears from them. Thus, this work, and its fierce exploration outside my comfort zone, disturbed me. It's like watching a horror movie... one that is real. The idea that I, or someone I love, could be in such a toxic relationship propagates shivers of disgust down and up my spine. Amazing work. Scary and depressing as hell, but amazing.