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Click hereYou grinned. "Alright, good to know. No hickies in places that show at work."
"Mmm, you tease," she hummed. "Where would you put them?"
This was escalating to a place you were happy to go. Sabrina seemed like she was even bolder than usual when she was in front of a camera. First at the restaurant and now on this call, she seemed to let her kink out just a bit more.
"Well, the inside of your breasts," you said. "Or maybe the undersides so that if you wear a really short crop top you might still show it off. And the inside of your thighs. And maybe one right next to your little exclamation point."
"Did you like that?" she asked. "I just did it a couple of days ago. Nothing I've posted has shown it yet."
"It's very cute," you said. "And shows off your sparky personality."
She preened on the screen for a moment, playing up revelling in my compliments, before rolling back onto her side and looking at her phone on a more even plain.
"So, John, tomorrow I'm going to need you to ask Gemma for drinks after work."
You blinked, surprised at the sharp turn in the conversation. "Ah, what? Why?" you asked, trying to cover that you had a big hint as to why already after eavesdropping earlier.
"Because I think she would be good for you, and you'd be good for her," Sabrina said. "And because if we're going to be fucking around don't want to deprive her of a good dick like yours. She could really use it."
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Thanks for reading.
If you enjoyed, make sure to catch the rest of the series! It is ongoing and releases will be happening every few days as we catch up to current. I also suggest you check out my 'Technically We're Estranged' series for another Camgirl-related story with lots of teasing.
Cheers!
~Break.
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The Palm Oil Express 😂😂😂 The point of view is this story is odd, but I'm enjoying it none the less
Good premise.
Too many separate, not-really-connected scenes.
Needs longer scenes. More details. More teasing. Edging. Dialog about all of that.
Four stars.
Such a tease good story and great excitement being caught and find out but having to hide what you know. Good writing looking forward to the next chapter.
Imagine coming to a porn site to bitch about very gentle racism. Stay outta the interracial gang bang section, fellas.
I was surprised. All of a sudden a mention of a New York guy who happenms to be Jewaih.
I am writing this comment on Passover, 5783 Easter weekend 2023. I am a Christian with a number of friends who happen to be Jewish. They are first my friends, then they have professions and then they have sports preferences and omn weekends like this one, I think about their religions
Yesterday, I sent my Jewish friends best wishes for Passover. I received back Easter wishes.
We have to look at the similarities, not the differences.
Please, tone it down.
With appreciaiton.
Yeah, but if there are better ways to say it, why not say it that way? The antisemitism doesn't bother me as much as that it's terrible writing (the quotation marks somehow make it even worse) in an otherwise enjoyable story. Why explicitly use a stereotype instead of allowing the character's words and actions to define him? He's perfectly fine without that line. With it, he's pure caricature.
Hell, naming him Mosche is cringe-inducing enough. It's like naming a Black character Leroy Brown. (You could just google common Jewish first names and choose something that doesn't quite shove it in the reader's face.) Indeed, I deal with this stuff all the time when editing for (well-intentioned) clients in their 60s and 70s whose stories feature Black characters. They don't intend to be racist, they just don't have a great antenna for it.
Well, other than the typical NY Jew and Hebrew school nonsense—they're embarrassingly bad—I'm enjoying the story. But I wince every time Mosche is in a scene—enough that I had to come back here to make a comment. If you got rid of those lines and gave him a name like Adam/Daniel/David/Joseph or something the story would be stronger.
@Bocj - Fair criticism, but he's based on a real person. There might have been better ways to say it, but it's a very specific 'typecast' that the person I based the character on lives out in their day-to-day.
Cheers!
This is a hot story that I’m enjoying. I can get past the second person, but I was really disappointed that you stuck in a gratuitous and explicitly antisemitic stereotype. Why go on about how Mosche is a “typical New York Jew” whose negative traits remind the main character of “kids who went to Hebrew school”? It’s just disgusting antisemitism, not even dressed up as anything else.