All Comments on 'The OF Girl Ch. 111-120'

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Flash forwards always suck, but using one then not even reaching that part in this section is particularly annoying.

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The flash forward brings some much needed tension into the story. I love it. Who is mad at who? What could've possibly gone so haywire that both Sabrina and Gemma are fuming? Leaving the reader on pins and needles was an excellent choice. Can't wait to read more.

Love it! Looking forward to the next chapters

Definitely need to sabotage Joy. She's gotta go. After getting her ego destroyed.

Holy raging thundercunt Batman they both gotta go

Well another curve ball the adventure continues let the party continue. keep up the good stuff looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice to see the story evolving after a lot of sex. Way to go!

All the I love yous is a little nauseating, especially for how long the relationships are but great story nonetheless.