All Comments on 'The OF Girl Ch. 131-140'

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Really enjoying this series - thanks for writing it

Love the story. Sexy and with captivating plot. Please do more.

This series just gets better and better with every entry. Can't wait to see the continued build with Sabrina and Gemma.....and maybe Sabrina's sister or Becks? I know, I know, don't be greedy. Plus cannot wait to see how they deal with spoiled insufferable Joy.

The bit about being fired over donuts is inspired. It really brought out how petty Joy and her mother are. Also, the partner inter personal dynamics came out which is fun.

My only criticism of the story so far is the timeline seems compressed if you ever think about it. Like I’m surprised Joy would make that boy toy speech the first day she was there,

I like her using Daddy.

Good stuff

Well I want to see how they get rid of Joy and how th boss is going to work it.

Great, keep it up!!

Enjoying it all so far, thank you