All Comments on 'The OF Girl Ch. 141-150'

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I've absolutely no complaints so far. Loving it, 5 stars all day.

Lucy can never come back into the picture for John. Just saying....... They need to tie her up in her own room when John comes over only released when John departs from their apartment. But leave her door open so she has to listen to John and Gemma if the other two roommates aren't there. Lucy is a true bitch that never matured and doesn't know what she wants.

Terrific series, every section. This is the kind of stuff I come to Literotica for. And with. Hot teasing sex and good friendly fun people. Thank you.

Really appreciate that this didn’t become the Joy show. Keep up the good work.

Did spellcheck get you?

>Lucy's mouth was hanging open at the obsolete torrent of vitriol Gemma had just spilt out.

Obscene rather than obsolete?

plot is developing very slowly. 150K+ words in doesn't feel like a lot has transpired.

loving the story,can't wait for the next instalment

Eagerly awaiting the next episode. Please don’t keep us waiting.

really hope we get some more of this story soon. youve kind of vanished both on here and on Chyoa. Went from at least one update a day over there to now its been a good while with none of your stories getting anything new. Miss them as they are really great stories.

outlined a posting schedule on patreon just to disappear from lit completely

Look forward to the next episode...

I think Joy needs some humiliation at the hands of Andy. He's pretty much useless anyway - kill 2 birds with 1 stone lol. Have her think she's getting John but gets caught with Andy up her ass...

Another great addition

Always a bad sign when I start skipping through a story looking for something new and interesting. Sex with S & G separately for the 100th time doesn’t do it, nor does the 1000th “I love you.” You’re a great writer but this story is in a bit of a rut these last few chapters. The work thread is interesting but more elevator smooching is a waste of time. Maybe some aggressive editing might have tightened it up a bit.

Reading your stories is almost as ludicrous as reading your story tags, I mean who searches for ‘lawyer’ or ‘pinch’ and ‘ax throwing’ !? Your spelling is atrocious!

Fabulous story telling. You pull off the difficult trick of never repeating the same scenario. Each time has that little twist or added extra that keeps things fresh without it seeming in any way that it's 'by the numbers'. I'm enjoying watching the story come to a climax. Repeatedly :)