by BreakTheBar
God this gets so sickeningly sweet sometimes and I FREAKING LOVE IT!!!!!! Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work!
Having just read the whole thing over the last 36 hours, I have found my new favourite series on this site.
Thank you Break. I love reading this and the characters, this and the Boyfriend are the only thing I have reread multiple times on here. You have also inspired me to get back to writing and my first submission is waiting in the Pending Que.
I like the OF series and the AMA Boyfriend series but your Quarenteam series is my favorite, even over CorruptingPower's version.
Man I'm losing it over here like a junkie waiting for his next fix I'm hooked and I have way to much down time wow
You’re a great writer but this chapter seemed like filler. We all originally came to this site for one thing. And virtually all your chapters (regardless of the story) deliver on that count, but this one didn’t. In bed late at night, after a long day, wife snoring next to me and…you leave me hanging. Argh!
I really hope this foursome works out, and also that Olivia gets her time to shine soon
This was really... lackluster, and not for the lack of sex, because honestly with the way you write sex it gets old REALLY fast. This reads like it was written by someone who has never talked to a woman in his life, and maybe that's the point, but it doesn't come off well.
As usual, good dialog, but bad story.