All Comments on 'The OF Girl Ch. 061-070'

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Well, I'm caught up now. Guess I'm joining the patreon. DANGIT. :D Great series! Keep up the good work!

Loving the series. Can't wait to see how they find balance with the feelings. Keep up the great work

I have no idea why this is rated high, the character development is shit and the dialogue is amateur.

Bonus 6th star for the Nathan Fillion reference lol

How dare you besmirch the name of Nathan Fillion, only alright!?!?! Great work so far, glad I gave it a chance.

I love how the characters and feelings develop. You make it feel romantic and hot and exciting.

Wait, he's not a brown coat??!!! off with his 'ead!

Still good not sure what i can say.

Good, but the weird thing with the squirting is a turnoff. If you want to get peed on, just say that so we can skip the story, don't hide it and pretend it's normal.

I am very much enjoying the story. My only critique is the second person point of view slipped into first person a couple of times. It made it slightly confusing. Other than that it is quite good and fun.

Great story, keep it up

Nathan Billion is clown prince but Stana Katic is the queen of that show

Love the story, characters, pacing, sex, and romance...but that 2nd PPOV is really hard to read and take serious.