All Comments on 'The Offer'

Boring, drags along, very easy to not want to read this....... you have to keep the interest up.........

Absolutely loved it. I actually scrolled thru some of the sex to get to the rest of the story. Great read!

Obvythis story is very long but I got lost in it. I get the part of protecting the estate but what is the point of the “community”? Just sex? Seems like the somehow there are willing subjects of the Matriarch.

quite long but intriguing

suggest breaking anything like thint thre or four parts

definitely showed strength of place

I started perusing this story and it completely pulled me in, captivated me, with the incredible story unfolding and the deliciously hot erotic scenes. Fantastic work.

Wonderful story. I really enjoyed. I know it was written some time ago but a follow up would be great.