by Lorelei907
What a treat. First we have our heroine's heroic erotic efforts, then the drama with Julie, which is sensitively handled. Looking forward to more.
This is a magnificent story, and this chapter is no exception. Keep up the great writing.
I know the feeling of marathon self love and you described it perfectly. Also the “what-can-I-get-away-with-at-work” thoughts - you’re a female version of me :-) I am very impressed with the emotional journey of both you and Julie. Relationships are hard and leave us self doubting often. Very well depicted here.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
OttawaGuy50s
I absolutely loved reading through this. I had to pace myself at the beginning; the depth of your descriptions, and the eroticism of the narrative in the first half, was almost too much to take. You have such a scintillating style of writing!
The second half of your writing was so emotionally engaging in a way that I did not expect and I had to resist spreading to the end to understand what had happened to Julie.
What a fantastic read. I can't wait for the next installment!
Bugs? Uh-oh. Bedbugs, I guess? If Julie moves her stuff in, something of hers is sure to be contaminated. Not good. Infestation coming, moving in with Julie. 😖
Another clever line
My pussy seemed to know what was inside and was drawn towards it like a magnet,
Awesome writing style
So well written! That moment of knowing you've been dumped is the absolute worst and you made me feel that all over again - thanks for that! Seriously though, you expressed the emotion so well! Thanks for writing this!