All Comments on 'The Office Surprise'

but definitely has potential...I do hope you plan on continuing...and with more action, too!

Much, much too short.

and even greater if drawn out a little

Like all rules:

K eep

I t

S hort 'n

S weet

Is not good if taken too far!

Your first story is very hot and well written...now give us more...much more...very slowly...as I know you can do.

Very nice for your first story...now we want more...much more...

just wanted to read something else from one of the authors of the Russian chain. Nice story. Now you must have worked in a big office.

just wanted to read something else from one of the authors of the Russian chain. Nice story. Now you must have worked in a big office.

But I'd love to read more next time.