All Comments on 'The Old Barn'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL STORY

A well told story; exciting erotic & very arousing yet so amorous, affectionate & loving! My only criticism being, yet again the ubiquitous hymen placement, which in real life is at the vaginal entrance, not part way along it towards the cervix! However this is minor, so well done & I look forward to more!

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