All Comments on 'The Old Horny Man'

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jneric2691jneric2691over 5 years ago
Nice build up

Short, to the point and a very good story.

amachiamachiover 5 years ago
Great!

Short and sweet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ok

Not your best 1🌟

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Damn

Shittttttttttttttttttttt there has to be moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ends too soon

Fuck a great story ends much too fucking soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fuck

I agree, fuck a great beginning but no real fucking.

eroenthusiasteroenthusiast6 minutes ago

That was awesome, well done. If you ever decide to continue this I'd be happy to read it.

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