All Comments on 'The Older Student'

A sweet and gentle love story.

Boyd

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Great Job! Nice little romance, but written extremly sensuously! Normique always arouses me!

Great work!

Beautiful, believable, sweet, gentle story of love. I particularly liked the way the sexual intimacy progressed without vulgarity, lustfulness or wantonness. Do write more...

A special story. The setting we knew and the situation we would love. Good work Normique .. Willypaw

This was a very romantic story. You were more descriptive about the foot massage than you were the making love part, and it ended quickly, but it was still a pretty nice story. 4 stars, could have been a 5. Keep writing.

The story started well and was progressing nicely until the end, when it felt that you'd had enough of the characters and just wanted to wrap it up quickly.

A good story, with good characters and well developed to a great extent. It is a pity that in the end everything accelerated a little, maybe a page more of how your relationship progress would have been okay.

Anyway, I give you 5 *.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Could have done with a lot more packing / detail & a meeting with Ted was just about mandatory, but we didn't get that. Perhaps a little rushed to finish??

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