All Comments on 'The One for Me Ch. 04-06'

noticed some errors in content. the hotel name, him and his dad had to go to her apt without leaving it, even they describe the same event or words said differently

The errors ruined the story, your editor if you have one didn't do the job. I have read a few of your stories, and it seems there are a lot of different techniques in these offerings.

Its as if more than one person wrote it and everything was cut and pasted together.

I am not a literary icon but it is very obvious.

What a wonderful description of people that just care for each other!

If only all people could feel like this. Seeing what really matters!

'Iread2relax' u have a very big heart!!

I enjoyed this story. I like the fact that the male and female protagonist stayed true to their beliefs and convictions. So many young and old alike today compromise their values and although these two did slip up, they remained steadfast. Thank you, Iread, for sharing this tale. There were a few errors, but really, the content still flowed clearly.

Cindy Notts

Keep writing IR2R, I will keep reading. :-)

This really is a sweet story and it was just what I needed after a hectic work day. I can read about vamps and politics all day long, but sometimes you want a little bitter-sweet that ends with a smile. Fun Stuff!!!! Thanks!

I love this story. It was different but I loved it. Looking for more exciting adventures, drama, romance, etc....

The wedding bed is undefiled, but we as humans sometimes take things out of order. Realistic!!! It does happen, especially with all the fireworks.Excellent. :-)

Great job as usual. I love that it was a short read, it didn't have to be long and drawn out for the story to be excellent. Ross and Anna were made for each other. They stood up for each other and didn't let their parents or the Smiths get in between them. At the end of the day they are adults and love each other.

Ok so there were some errors. As most of us are amateur writers, they are only to be expected. This was a really sweet story, that showed some of the problems that can happen between different religions, and different upbringings. A good effort, and a writer to watch out for

I expected a "twist" - that they would find out that Ross' mother was Anna's birth mother, and so they could not get married.

I'm glad I was wrong, and that you stuck with a romantic ending!

If I could have I would have added more stars. A great story by a great author.

What a lovely story; thank you for sharing.

Anna’s skin color seems to darken as the story goes on. In the first chapter, she was described as caramel, then milky chocolate brown. At the start of this chapter, she is described as deep brown.