All Comments on 'The One-Way Voyage (Day One)'

Well, I said this was very good and it's quite well written, but I wouldn't call this edgy anymore, it's downright scary now! This young man's thoughts and fears mirrored my own as I read this. At this early point in the story, I'm not as much wishing for the protagonist's escape as I am hoping he'll find a way to turn the tables on this sick bastard. Looking forward to seeing where this intense story goes, or at least I think I am.