All Comments on 'The Only Constant is Change Ch. 11'

Some truly great writing and very profound in lots of ways. However I’m glad your taking the story in a new direction and can’t wait for more episodes.

It took much longer to produce this chapter than I expected, in part because I really didn't want to kill off Ava. But I think I was headed for a dead end otherwise. I hope others have a similar reaction to yours.

It might be well written but the story telling is shot.

Too many jumps to too many things.

I guess you will bring it all together and make sense. Shame as this series had been one of the best.

I'm pissed u killed Ava

I thought long and hard about that. Part of the reason there was a bigger gap between chapters. But I concluded that he wasn't going to end up where I need him to go without a nudge (shove?) in another direction. It really hurt to kill Ava off, which a phenomenon that I always discounted before I started writing.

Thanks for staying with me. The next chapter is submitted and should be out in the next few days.

MB

So what was the point of killing off Ava? Had the story run out of latitude and to keep it going you just decided to be lazy. Instead of writing better and planning this shit out you decide to just rip a hole in the story so you can keep on writing to fill it back up.

Also for fucks sake trying to lure in with an old lost almost flame. Fuck off. The Jeremy from school doesn’t exist anymore and has evolved and he had no connection to Monica so 13 or 14 years later she’s just a black chick 7% of the USA population.

Also looking at a major career change during a time of intense emotional stress is one of the biggest no no’s there is. And by fuck following a scrag to the job is even worse. Who will the company ditch if the relationship goes bad? Maybe Monica is so desperate for the high school version that when Jeremy refuses anything more than friends she gets vindictive.

Hooking up with Taylor would be better.

I hate fuckers that do the min service to get the most out and then run for the hills as soo as they can to chase the cash. Traitorous cunts.

Killing off Ava and the little boy. I’m done with this story.

Now to go back and give 1 Star to every chapter.

This entire chapter killed the rest of the story. It's okay to end a story without shitting on it first.

If I could award negative points I would.

I hate to say this man but a blown air line forces the brakes on for trucks, that's why you hear the release of air when the come to a stop, the air compressors pressurise the line to unclamp the brakes. Just FYI for next time.

So….Taylor just ceased to exist?