All Comments on 'The Only Constant is Change Ch. 13'

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Ranger9494Ranger9494almost 5 years ago
Love it

Cant wait for more. Keep it coming please.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitalmost 5 years ago
Truly excellent

Everything about the story works. The scenarios are quite realistic, and very well written. Excellent character development. I can feel the emotional turmoil in Jeremy, and the angst of Cat and Monica. The title is cliche, but accurate and fitting.

I’m optimistic that the next chapter is near....

Thanks for sharing.

MelanPoncaMelanPoncaalmost 5 years ago
McRavens speech

Hey MB,

I appreciate the reference to the McRaven speech you gave in chapter 7. I just listened to it (before finishing the rest of the chapter!). He's one HELL of a good speaker. I can clearly see how he made his rank: clear, concise, confident, and consistent communication and motivation.

Thanks again for the heads up.

Mel

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Update (6-20-20): I had an idea regarding the collated first 13 chapters of Carson Evolved, but I'm not allowed to reference it in my submission. So, if you're a follower of mine or somehow stumble across my bio and get to read this, here's the deal: I completed editing the c...

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