All Comments on 'The Open Window'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

nice...short but nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It felt a bit rushed like you just wanted to get to the sexual part. It was good though but I’d have preferred a bit more build up you know?

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just a switch who has found an interest in writing again after so long (updates whenever I get inspired, so no set schedule)