All Comments on 'The Operative: File 01'

Funny, but I don't think it was quite what you intended. Given the outlandish proportions and, um, sexual abilities of both characters, it would work quite nicely in "humor & satire" but seems ridiculous anywhere else.

I concur with your point, though I would mention that all of my stories work along the rediculous perpotion lines, so it isn't exactly a departure for me in that regard.

This was so hot, by the end I was cumming in my pants.

This gave me a huge boner just like all your stories do. I hope you write many more stories in the future!