All Comments on 'The Oral Virgin'

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eric shawn listoeric shawn listoover 19 years ago
good job!

Really loved the setting of this tale. College days and hot sex. Strange typos ( ., T) made it a bit difficult to read at times. Nothing a good proofread couldn't have prevented. The scene reheasing the play when he first touches her breast is great! Keep it up! (There's something wrong with your Submissions page--won't come up--I wanted more!)

esl

ps. great when he asked if he could cum in her.

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