All Comments on 'The Order Ch. 04'

You are a very talented writer. This is 5 star story. Really enjoyed it. "Femocracy" story are very hard to plot.

If most of the men didn't have sex the population would thin out very quickly. Every couple needs to have 2-3 children just to maintain the population. Who's is having all the children in this world?

Magic is a good plot to give females the upper hand, but a crossbow or bow and arrow would probably kill before the magic user got close enough to use it.

There is a novel out which maybe made into a film where the men are scared of woman as some have the power to shock them by touch. if a man carries a taser he also has that power. Even a knife can cause harm with a touch.

I have written a few "women in control" stories trying to iron out these things s nearly impossible. Easisest way is if men are physically weaker and smaller.

That said, magic cock ring LOL Brilliant! Will read the rest of your stuff now.

I can't understand why people don't comment more on this.

Excellent story. I think most readers are too lazy to read anything longer than a few thousand words.

This was well plotted and tight.

Your ending reminds me of a Jr. High school dance. Then a few of the braver kids ask someone to dance. The circle/ ring starts anew

Great story - you should write more.