All Comments on 'The Order Ch. 13'

I am really enjoying you story. At first I didn't wont to follower but some how I got hooked.

It's been so long since the last chapter, I'd almost forgotten about this story.

Interesting fight scenes and I love the way all the brothers have come together. Hopefully the next chapter will reveal Nadia is more than she seems otherwise it seems a little odd for all this trouble to kill a simple human that any present day criminal could kill in 5 mins (I think).

Please don't leave it too long for the next chapter!!!!

Nice action chapter.

Loved the action, the humor among the brothers, and especially the tender moments between Andraemalek and Nadia. It's adorable how concerned he is about her. Thanks again for updating so quickly! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Andrae's character continues to amaze me. Love the Brethren collectively & individually. Liam is a riot! The fight scene kept me riveted to the screen & wanting more. I'm kinda hoping Nadia's character develops a bit of an edge to compliment her innocence, especially after everything she has experienced thus far. Thank you for the update!

I have to say these fight scenes are amazing! I also agree with another commenter that i hope there is more than meets the eye to Nadia. Granted she is getting stronger and can handle more, I just want her to be special somehow and not just to Andrae because he loves her. I am glad that she is finally admitting that she loves him back though!! Fantastic work as usual!! Keep up the great job!!

OMGoodness!!! This is soooo good! Will continue to pant for more.

*smiles stupidly* :) :) :) :) I love the Brethren! Can't wait for the next chapter! <3 L.

The suspense you are building is great. Just a little thing, you said the second demon used telepathy to stop her heart. Telepathy is purely mental communication, like what Caleb and Astaroth do, it has no physical effects. That is teleportation. It doesn't really matter though.