All Comments on 'The Order: Training Lyla Pt. 01'

Great! Want Some more!

thats actually amazing!!

Can't wait

Thanks for the feedback guys! I like to know what people like or don't like so this comment section is AWESOME!! Thanks again!

Congrats on one of the best on Literotica. You have new fan, Looking forward to further installments. Great job!

Seriously fuck hot. Seriously.

A lot of men fondling and sharing women could never be interesting no matter what....

Steamin', smokin', mind blowin' H-O-T!!! Can't wait for more.

This first chapter is so amazingly erotic, especially for anyione who loves really big natural breasts as a focus of foreplay and intercourse. Can't wait to read more!

I wish that my father would do that to me . I know he eyes me and tries to see my tits and always looks between my legs when I'm sunbathing in the garden in my bikini . Sometimes I pull the fabric at my pussy over a bit so that he can see some pussy lip . I'd let him fuck me but he seems scared to make a move . Any idea as to what I should do to get him to make a move ?

The only flaws I found was the lack of scence description. Such as the description of Max's office and the desk he was fucking Anna on. Was the desk the kind you would find in any office or was it a fancy one made from oak?

Other than that, Great story. Really got me hard.

Hey Anonymous, can I be your mother and teach you how to tke dad?...Neha

Please write more.

great story, when is nest chapter comming up, waiting eagerly for next episode, plz include some lactation

Please sir, can I have more?

and perversely erotic. This has the makings of a novel.

I excited about her training,I'm sure Lyla will get some training from mom later on how to eat pussy. Dad will really LOVE that part since like every married man he'll love watching his wife eat pussy only this will be extra special since it will be mom eating daughter and daughter mom. Hell maybe he'll have Lyla eat his cum out of mom which will be different since most men want their lady eating out of the lady he just fucked. All this training will turn Lyla into "The Perfect Wife" for some lucky man. Let your exciting mind run wild with this great erotic story. LT

Great start - cant wait for the next part!

Please hurry and publish the next installment. I am hooked and can't wait to read more.

Will you continue?

Had me creaming the whole time. Awesome job!!

Great story, loved it. 5 Stars