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by Cornfussed

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Outstanding

Looking forward to more, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great so far.

Very hot story. I am impressed with this being your first effort. You might want to code future parts as a sci-fi or mind control story though. I can not wait to see where you go with this. Austin should have some real fun with his sister and her daughters and once they have been taken over their neighbors could be invited over for a backyard party. The Sloane women could set up a hot bi-sexual orgy at the truck stop as a lot of truckers get infected and then fuck whatever hole is closest. You have set up a story with a lot of interesting paths to write about. Please continue soon.

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