All Comments on 'The Other Child Ch. 03'

Love this story. Glad this chapter got posted. Take what time you need though, it's good xD

please continue

Please bring out the next chapter soon. this is a fantastic story

Very HOtt!!! please wrtie more chapters to this !!

it is very good hope to see more very soon

are you going to finish this or leave it

I really would love a continuation of this wonderful story! It's supposed to be a 20 month house arrest. This is like what? Two weeks worth? Please???

... I have no current plans to continue this tale. Like far too many of my stories, I had planned out what would happen, but the creative spark died. I've been working on this and I hopefully will stop that process soon. Coming back to 'The Other Child' isn't one of the projects I have in mind. I apologize.

You have given up on this. it was getting to the Point where he would have the Mother and Daughter getting Designated Days. and as Time goes. He would be coming up on his 20 Month End and they would be Trying to keep him around. He could also leave Dad a Little Present. A Child by Zuiko.

Jaycee could be regular visitor, Dulce and Maria might join in...

Great stories, but so many are unfinished for years. If you have an outline of where these are needing to go, could you allow one of your writer/editor friends finish it with you doing final edit? Thank you for your stories.

more what will happen when dad comes home?

.....sadly the ending was very weak.

It just didn't match up to the rest of the story which was very good.

Rapier

should have a better finish

does husband return or do they get a letter from lawyer telling them that he died

as he was involved in government projet

left everything to his son wife & daughter

Really liked the story but sad to see it doesn't have an ending.

So many authors on this site that I love leave their stories hanging unfinished. Please finish this

Excellent piece of work. Thank you.

why is it not finished?

dikupinya ~ because my brain seems to be set on permanent malfunction. I wish it wasn't so, but it is. I hope one day to continue this tale.

Take care,

James aka FinalStand

We need a chapter 4 dammit