All Comments on 'The Other Shoe Ch. 01'

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PrinceBambiPrinceBambialmost 5 years ago
Nothing taboo here...

Nothing taboo at all in this story. In fact, it's just about an asshole college boy who's willing to say or do anything to satisfy his own selfish desires and get into a girl's panties. What a douche

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good start

Ignore the previous comment, it’s chapter 1 ffs, It’s a good start and I’m sure the taboo part will become evident soon.

bnaylor987bnaylor987almost 5 years agoAuthor
Intended to be another catagory

Sorry to all the people who were hoping to see parents have sex with their kids or whatever...the naysayers are correct, it was meant for another category. I went back and forth between first time and erotic couplings. I ultimately decided on first time, for Sherry's sake.

This is kind of setting up the back story. Chapter 2 is more of an actual "first time" and then from there, who knows what category.

prop69prop69almost 5 years ago
Very Interesting

Where do we go from here?

Is she really Kerry pretending to be Sherry?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Incest?

I'm wondering why this is even in the incest brother/sister category? Also beginning to wonder why i even bothered reading this, almost at 8th grade literature level

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Womanhood?

"You are the first guy to see my womanhood."

FFS, nobody in real life uses that word, call it what it is.

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