All Comments on 'The Other Woman'

I'm not sure of the correct word to use.

Nice plot though

A little light, a little sweet. A little short, too.

...heavy on action! Very descriptive, very well-written. This is one hot shower scene!

It's rare to encounter such intensely erotic girl/girl action as in this story. The story gets very graphic as the erotic descriptions propel this story along ~ passion and arousal builds steadily. Very 'in the moment' feeling type of writing. You'll like this one!

Loved it will look for more of your stories