All Comments on 'The Pains Of Loving Jenny Ch. 02'

by draculess

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cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
Nice...

But you need to slow the action, the sex was too fast and you need more detail. :)

Cookie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
i second that..

i loved it...but i did feel rushed in it...everything else was great..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
pretty good

It was good, but you rushed to much, slow it down give more details... you have potential

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